Before I go into to much detail let me say unequivocally I hate Crow-quill pens. They blotch, they drip, they break, they stutter and I have spent lots and lots of time with them over the past two weeks.
This is a 15 x 20" study of composition using nothing more then lines. It is a linear-datum composition with a skewed horizontal language.
Things I like about it. The proportions turned out well and in the initial studies leading up to it I had the diagonal a solid black line, and in the final I changed it to the same horizontal language as the rest, which ties it together.
Things I don't like. Some of the earlier studies I drew the lines with ruler and they were razor sharp. This was booth good and bad. I like the more organic feel, but I have less control over the damn pen then I would like so the lines are rougher because of incompetence not design.
Oh... and see that big heavy block right below the light block? That was not on purpose. That was the thrice-damned pen leaking ink which got wicked under my trace paper. I added that block to cover the huge blob of misshapen ink.
Everyone in my critique group loved it as contrast to the light block...
But we're done with it and I can throw my Crow-quill pen out the window...
Wait?
What's that?
Our next assignment uses
WHAT?
*mutter grumble swear*
Excuse me, I'll be outside looking for my pen.
*Edit apparently my random character used in the place of swearing genereted some HTML code that caused the paragraph to replicate. Who know I was so talented?
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I don't understand but it sounds good and looks great.